As for the overall angle and idea behind this piece, I love it. With that I would have made it more clear around the eye and let the focus get fuzzy the further away it gets from the lashes. You can see in the cent of the eye you have reflections of the lashes. I would have liked to see sharper focus on the lashes themselves because it really helps the overall tone and mood. But the color scheme you used was great and makes it have a very surreal feel over all. From one to ten I'd give it a 7&half, all and all a well brought to life piece.